Issue 11529: Section 6/6.4 (marte-ftf) Source: (, ) Nature: Revision Severity: Minor Summary: There a lot of spelling errors in the section 6.4.1: - "...; chapter 0, General Component Model, introdces a general componenet model suitable for RTES." should be rewritten as "...; chapter 11, General Component Model, introduces a general component model suitable for RTES." - "..., chapter 13, RTE Model of Compuation and Communication, ..." should be rewritten as "..., chapter 13, RTE Model of Computation and Communication, ..." - "It does not intend to define new analmysis technologies, but to define the information required for annotation models on whoch external analysis techniques may be applied." should be rewritten as "It does not intend to define new analysis technologies, but to define the information required for annotation models on which external analysis techniques may be applied." - "..., specializes the generic framework for performaing schedulability analysis, whereas ..." should be rewritten as "..., specializes the generic framework for performing schedulability analysis, whereas ..." Resolution: Do editiorial change as suggested. Revised Text: In section 6.4.1: - "...; chapter 0, General Component Model, introdces a general componenet model suitable for RTES." should be rewritten as "...; chapter 11, General Component Model, introduces a general component model suitable for RTES." - "..., chapter 13, RTE Model of Compuation and Communication, ..." should be rewritten as "..., chapter 13, RTE Model of Computation and Communication, ..." - "It does not intend to define new analmysis technologies, but to define the information required for annotation models on whoch external analysis techniques may be applied." should be rewritten as "It does not intend to define new analysis technologies, but to define the information required for annotation models on which external analysis techniques may be applied." - "..., specializes the generic framework for performaing schedulability analysis, whereas ..." should be rewritten as "..., specializes the generic framework for performing schedulability analysis, whereas ..." Actions taken: October 4, 2007: received issue February 17, 2010: closed issue Discussion: End of Annotations:===== m: webmaster@omg.org Date: 04 Oct 2007 00:41:13 -0400 To: Subject: Issue/Bug Report -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Name: WILSON PARDI JUNIOR Company: UFRGS - DELET mailFrom: wilsonjr@ieee.org Notification: Yes Specification: UML Profile for MARTE, Beta 1 Section: 6/6.4 FormalNumber: ptc/07-08-04 Version: 1.0 RevisionDate: 08/04/2007 Page: 15, 16 Nature: Revision Severity: Minor HTTP User Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Windows; U; Windows NT 5.1; en-US; rv:1.8.1.7) Gecko/20070914 Firefox/2.0.0.7 Description There a lot of spelling errors in the section 6.4.1: - "...; chapter 0, General Component Model, introdces a general componenet model suitable for RTES." should be rewritten as "...; chapter 11, General Component Model, introduces a general component model suitable for RTES." - "..., chapter 13, RTE Model of Compuation and Communication, ..." should be rewritten as "..., chapter 13, RTE Model of Computation and Communication, ..." - "It does not intend to define new analmysis technologies, but to define the information required for annotation models on whoch external analysis techniques may be applied." should be rewritten as "It does not intend to define new analysis technologies, but to define the information required for annotation models on which external analysis techniques may be applied." - "..., specializes the generic framework for performaing schedulability analysis, whereas ..." should be rewritten as "..., specializes the generic framework for performing schedulability analysis, whereas ..."