Issue 11889: Typos: (marte-ftf)
Source: Carleton University (Dr. Dorina C. Petriu, petriu(at)sce.carleton.ca)
Nature: Uncategorized Issue
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Summary: - Page 265, the first paragraph: “between the two between”
- Page 280, the second line from the bottom: “sorrespond”
- Page 311, the first paragraph: “ypical performance”
- Page 315, in the middle: “PProcesses”
- Page 325, in the middle: “avalilable”

Resolution: Corrections are described in the revised text.
Revised Text: In section 15.2.2.2, p.265, first paragraph of the Time Intervals section, replace "The inter-occurrence time interval between the two between successive initiations…" by "The inter-occurrence time interval between two successive initiations…".
In section 15.3.2.13, p.280, constraint [1], replace "… servDemand and servCount sorrespond, …" by "… servDemand and servCount correspond…".
In section 17.2.1, p.311, first paragraph, replace "ypical performance properties include…" by "Typical performance properties include…".
In section 17.2.2.6, p.315, second item of the first enumeration, replace "… in different PProcesses…" by "… in different processes…"
In section 17.4.1, p.325, second paragraph, replace "…(multiplicity of avalilable resource instances)…" by "…(multiplicity of available instances)…".

Actions taken:
December 21, 2007: received issue
February 17, 2010: closed issue
Discussion: 

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Date: Fri, 21 Dec 2007 23:36:54 -0500
From: "Dorina C. Petriu" <petriu@sce.carleton.ca>
Organization: Carleton University
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Subject: MARTE GQAM-PAM: some issues


The following issues refer to the PAM and GQAM chapters from the MARTE document ptc/07-08-04:


This is issue # 11889

Typos:

- Page 265, the first paragraph: .between the two between.
- Page 280, the second line from the bottom: .sorrespond.
- Page 311, the first paragraph: .ypical performance.
- Page 315, in the middle: .PProcesses.