Issue 15503: Chapter 8. Typos (bpmn2-rtf) Source: (, ) Nature: Revision Severity: Minor Summary: a) Section 8.2.3. Page 59. Table 8.10. Row “value”. It says “[Element [0..1]” It should say “Element [0..1]” First “[” should be removed ---------------------------------------------------------- b) Section 8.2.3. Page 59. Table 8.10. Row “valueRef”. It says “[Element [0..1]” It should say “Element [0..1]” First “[” should be removed ---------------------------------------------------------- c) Section 8.2.4. Page 62. It says “The ‘identity/relationship’ model it is reduced to the creation of families of typed relationships …” It should say “The ‘identity/relationship’ model is reduced to the creation of families of typed relationships …” “model it is reduced” should be replaced by “model is reduced” ---------------------------------------------------------- d) Section 8.2.4. Page 63. Table 8.15. Row “sources”. It says “[Element [1..*]” It should say “Element [1..*]” First “[” should be removed ---------------------------------------------------------- e) Section 8.2.4. Page 63. Table 8.15. Row “targets”. It says “[Element [1..*]” It should say “Element [1..*]” First “[” should be removed ---------------------------------------------------------- f) Section 8.3.1. Page 67. It says “An Association is line that MUST be drawn …” It should say “An Association is a line that MUST be drawn …” “is line” should be replaced by “is a line” ---------------------------------------------------------- g) Section 8.3.9. Page 90. It says “The details for the types of Gateways (Exclusive, Inclusive, Parallel, Event-Based, and Complex) is defined on page 295 …” It should say “The details for the types of Gateways (Exclusive, Inclusive, Parallel, Event-Based, and Complex) are defined on page 295 …” “is defined” should be replaced by “are defined” ---------------------------------------------------------- h) Section 8.3.10. Page 92. Table 8.47. Row “structureRef”. It says “[Element [0..1]” It should say “Element [0..1]” First “[” should be removed ---------------------------------------------------------- i) Section 8.3.11. Page 93. It says “In a Message is a rectangle with converging diagonal lines in the upper …” It should say “A Message is a rectangle with converging diagonal lines in the upper …” “In a” should be replaced by “A” ---------------------------------------------------------- j) Section 8.3.12. Page 96. It says “These parameters can be used at runtime to define query e.g., into an …” It should say “These parameters can be used at runtime to define a query e.g., into an …” “define query” should be replaced by “define a query” Resolution: Revised Text: Actions taken: September 13, 2010: received issue Discussion: End of Annotations:===== m: webmaster@omg.org Date: 11 Sep 2010 23:06:07 -0400 To: Subject: Issue/Bug Report ******************************************************************************* Name: Eduardo Jara Employer: mailFrom: ejara@craftware.net Terms_Agreement: I agree Specification: BPMN 2.0 Beta 2 Section: 8 FormalNumber: dtc/2010-06-05 Version: 2.0 Doc_Year: 2010 Doc_Month: June Doc_Day: Day Page: 59 Title: Chapter 8. Typos Nature: Revision Severity: Minor CODE: 3TMw8 B1: Report Issue Description: a) Section 8.2.3. Page 59. Table 8.10. Row .value.. It says .[Element [0..1]. It should say .Element [0..1]. First .[. should be removed ---------------------------------------------------------- b) Section 8.2.3. Page 59. Table 8.10. Row .valueRef.. It says .[Element [0..1]. It should say .Element [0..1]. First .[. should be removed ---------------------------------------------------------- c) Section 8.2.4. Page 62. It says .The .identity/relationship. model it is reduced to the creation of families of typed relationships .. It should say .The .identity/relationship. model is reduced to the creation of families of typed relationships .. .model it is reduced. should be replaced by .model is reduced. ---------------------------------------------------------- d) Section 8.2.4. Page 63. Table 8.15. Row .sources.. It says .[Element [1..*]. It should say .Element [1..*]. First .[. should be removed ---------------------------------------------------------- e) Section 8.2.4. Page 63. Table 8.15. Row .targets.. It says .[Element [1..*]. It should say .Element [1..*]. First .[. should be removed ---------------------------------------------------------- f) Section 8.3.1. Page 67. It says .An Association is line that MUST be drawn .. It should say .An Association is a line that MUST be drawn .. .is line. should be replaced by .is a line. ---------------------------------------------------------- g) Section 8.3.9. Page 90. It says .The details for the types of Gateways (Exclusive, Inclusive, Parallel, Event-Based, and Complex) is defined on page 295 .. It should say .The details for the types of Gateways (Exclusive, Inclusive, Parallel, Event-Based, and Complex) are defined on page 295 .. .is defined. should be replaced by .are defined. ---------------------------------------------------------- h) Section 8.3.10. Page 92. Table 8.47. Row .structureRef.. It says .[Element [0..1]. It should say .Element [0..1]. First .[. should be removed ---------------------------------------------------------- i) Section 8.3.11. Page 93. It says .In a Message is a rectangle with converging diagonal lines in the upper .. It should say .A Message is a rectangle with converging diagonal lines in the upper .. .In a. should be replaced by .A. ---------------------------------------------------------- j) Section 8.3.12. Page 96. It says .These parameters can be used at runtime to define query e.g., into an .. It should say .These parameters can be used at runtime to define a query e.g., into an .. .define query. should be replaced by .define a query.