Issue 15506: Chapter 11. Typos (bpmn2-rtf) Source: (, ) Nature: Revision Severity: Minor Summary: a) Section 11.3.1. Page 330. It says “Because the other outgoing Sequence Flows will have appropriately visible of data as described above, …” It should say “Because the other outgoing Sequence Flows will have appropriate visibility of data as described above, …” “have appropriately visible” should be replaced by “have appropriate visibility” ---------------------------------------------------------- b) Section 11.4.1. Page 337. It says “The width of the Participant Band will be expanded to contain both the name of the Participant and the multi-instance marker.” It should say “The high of the Participant Band will be expanded to contain both the name of the Participant and the multi-instance marker.” “width” should be replaced by “high” Note: On page 342 this (equivalent) sentence is a sub-bullet. ---------------------------------------------------------- c) Section 11.4.2. Page 341. It says “In addition, any Participant Band beyond the first two optional; ...” It should say “In addition, any Participant Band beyond the first two is optional; ...” “two optional” should be replaced by “two is optional” ---------------------------------------------------------- d) Section 11.4.2. Page 342. It says “The width of the Participant Band will be expanded to contain both the name of the Participant and the multi-instance marker.” It should say “The high of the Participant Band will be expanded to contain both the name of the Participant and the multi-instance marker.” “width” should be replaced by “high” Note: On page 337 this (equivalent) sentence is not a sub-bullet. ---------------------------------------------------------- e) Section 11.4.2. Page 342. Figure 11.23. It says “Figure 11.23 - Sub-Choreography Markers with a multi-instance Participant” It should say “Figure 11.23 ­ A Sub-Choreography with a multi-instance Participant” “Sub-Choreography Markers” should be replaced by “A Sub-Choreography” Note: Compare it with Figure 11.15, p.337. ---------------------------------------------------------- f) Section 11.4.6. Page 345. It says “…when the Participants send or receive Messages so that they Participants are NOT REQUIRED to guess about when it is their turn to send a Message.” It should say “…when the Participants send or receive Messages so that the Participants are NOT REQUIRED to guess about when it is their turn to send a Message.” “they Participants” should be replaced by “the Participants” Resolution: Revised Text: Actions taken: September 13, 2010: received issue Discussion: End of Annotations:===== m: webmaster@omg.org Date: 11 Sep 2010 23:20:53 -0400 To: Subject: Issue/Bug Report ******************************************************************************* Name: Eduardo Jara Employer: mailFrom: ejara@craftware.net Terms_Agreement: I agree Specification: BPMN 2.0 Beta 2 Section: 11 FormalNumber: dtc/2010-06-05 Version: 2.0 Doc_Year: 2010 Doc_Month: June Doc_Day: Day Page: 330 Title: Chapter 11. Typos Nature: Revision Severity: Minor CODE: 3TMw8 B1: Report Issue Description: a) Section 11.3.1. Page 330. It says .Because the other outgoing Sequence Flows will have appropriately visible of data as described above, .. It should say .Because the other outgoing Sequence Flows will have appropriate visibility of data as described above, .. .have appropriately visible. should be replaced by .have appropriate visibility. ---------------------------------------------------------- b) Section 11.4.1. Page 337. It says .The width of the Participant Band will be expanded to contain both the name of the Participant and the multi-instance marker.. It should say .The high of the Participant Band will be expanded to contain both the name of the Participant and the multi-instance marker.. .width. should be replaced by .high. Note: On page 342 this (equivalent) sentence is a sub-bullet. ---------------------------------------------------------- c) Section 11.4.2. Page 341. It says .In addition, any Participant Band beyond the first two optional; .... It should say .In addition, any Participant Band beyond the first two is optional; .... .two optional. should be replaced by .two is optional. ---------------------------------------------------------- d) Section 11.4.2. Page 342. It says .The width of the Participant Band will be expanded to contain both the name of the Participant and the multi-instance marker.. It should say .The high of the Participant Band will be expanded to contain both the name of the Participant and the multi-instance marker.. .width. should be replaced by .high. Note: On page 337 this (equivalent) sentence is not a sub-bullet. ---------------------------------------------------------- e) Section 11.4.2. Page 342. Figure 11.23. It says .Figure 11.23 - Sub-Choreography Markers with a multi-instance Participant. It should say .Figure 11.23 ­ A Sub-Choreography with a multi-instance Participant. .Sub-Choreography Markers. should be replaced by .A Sub-Choreography. Note: Compare it with Figure 11.15, p.337. ---------------------------------------------------------- f) Section 11.4.6. Page 345. It says ..when the Participants send or receive Messages so that they Participants are NOT REQUIRED to guess about when it is their turn to send a Message.. It should say ..when the Participants send or receive Messages so that the Participants are NOT REQUIRED to guess about when it is their turn to send a Message.. .they Participants. should be replaced by .the Participants.