Issue 15784: 09-12-09 SoaML 1.0 Beta 2 figure 79 p. 136 (soaml-rtf) Source: Naval Undersea Warfare Center (Mr. Richard L. Funk, richard.funk(at)navy.mil) Nature: Uncategorized Issue Severity: Summary: The text describing this figure implies that there should be participant swim lanes on this diagram, but there are none. Recommend adding the missing swim lanes. The reader might guess that there is a single swim lane for the OrderProcessing participant, and that this activity is 'owned' by the ManufacturerComponent, or that this activity is actually owned entirely by the OrderProcessing participant, but this is not apparent from the parts of the model shown. The latter context seems more likely, given the form of the activity, but mention of swim lanes in the text seems to contradict this, so the end result is confusion. Resolution: Revised Text: Actions taken: October 25, 2010: received issue Discussion: End of Annotations:===== ubject: 09-12-09 SoaML 1.0 Beta 2 figure 79 p. 136 Date: Mon, 25 Oct 2010 09:02:23 -0400 X-MS-Has-Attach: yes X-MS-TNEF-Correlator: Thread-Topic: 09-12-09 SoaML 1.0 Beta 2 figure 79 p. 136 Thread-Index: Act0RN0tUXXwnOzvQN+6KN76p9IFvg== From: "Funk, Richard L CIV NUWC NWPT" To: X-OriginalArrivalTime: 25 Oct 2010 13:02:24.0358 (UTC) FILETIME=[DE225060:01CB7444] The text describing this figure implies that there should be participant swim lanes on this diagram, but there are none. Recommend adding the missing swim lanes. The reader might guess that there is a single swim lane for the OrderProcessing participant, and that this activity is 'owned' by the ManufacturerComponent, or that this activity is actually owned entirely by the OrderProcessing participant, but this is not apparent from the parts of the model shown. The latter context seems more likely, given the form of the activity, but mention of swim lanes in the text seems to contradict this, so the end result is confusion. Rich Funk NUWC 401.832.8567 smime11.p7s