Issue 15822: Part document structures in Infrastructure need to conform to ISO Standard Document Template Conventions (uml2-rtf) Source: Fujitsu (Mr. Tom Rutt, tom(at)coastin.com) Nature: Revision Severity: Minor Summary: UML 2.3 RTF resolved ISSUE 14277 as follows: “ Japan Superstructure PAS Ballot Comments - comment 20 Summary: Part I, II, III,, IV This is a multipart standard, use of "Part I, II, III, IV" make confusion. Delete unnecessary Part IV and Make others rewrite as clauses. 7. Structure, 12 Behavior, 19 Supplement and renumber other clauses. Resolution: Agree to change word “Part” to “Sub Part” throughout document. “ PTC/9-9-10 , the UML 2.3 Infrastructure convenience document has the changes of the tem “Part” to “Subpart”, as per the resolution to ISSUE 14277 by the UML 2.3 RTF. However the published UML 2.3 Infrastructure reverted to the use of the term “Part”. Also, ISO document templates do not allow hanging text. The introductory text for each is not in any numbered clause. Proposed Resolution: Change term “Part” to “Subpart”, as in PTC/9-9-10. Change title of section 6.2 to be “How to Read this Specificaton” as in PTC/9-9-10, and to be consistent with Superstructure. Add a new section 6.2.2 Contents of Subparts 6.2.2.1 Contents of Subpart I ­ Introduction <move the hanging intro from Part I into this subclause, with minor edits to fix pointers to sections> 6.2.2.2 Contents of Subpart II ­ Infrastructure Library <move the hanging intro from Part II into this subclause, with minor edits to fix pointers to sections> 6.2.2.3 Contents of Subpart III - Annexes <move the hanging intro from Part II into this subclause,> Resolution: Revised Text: Actions taken: November 22, 2010: received issue Discussion: End of Annotations:===== uthentication-Results: cm-omr4 smtp.user=tom@coastenterprises.com; auth=pass (PLAIN) X-Authenticated-UID: tom@coastenterprises.com Date: Sat, 20 Nov 2010 15:32:04 -0500 From: Tom Rutt Reply-To: tom@coastin.com User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Windows; U; Windows NT 5.1; en-US; rv:1.9.2.12) Gecko/20101027 Thunderbird/3.1.6 To: issues@omg.org, Juergen Boldt CC: Hiroshi Miyazaki , Tom Rutt , "uml2-rtf@omg.org" Subject: Two New Editorial Issues for UML 2.4 to Resolve ISO PAS Comments Here are two new editorial issues, which are required to resolve ISO PAS Ballot comments in UML 2. These should be assigned to the UML 2.4 RTF, so they can be resolved with UML 2.4 output. Tom ---- New ISSUE xxxxxx UML 2.3 Infrastructure Source: Tom Rutt, Fujitsu Title: Part document structures in Infrastructure need to conform to ISO Standard Document Template Conventions Category: Editorial Nature of Problem: UML 2.3 RTF resolved ISSUE 14277 as follows: . Japan Superstructure PAS Ballot Comments - comment 20 Summary: Part I, II, III,, IV This is a multipart standard, use of "Part I, II, III, IV" make confusion. Delete unnecessary Part IV and Make others rewrite as clauses. 7. Structure, 12 Behavior, 19 Supplement and renumber other clauses. Resolution: Agree to change word .Part. to .Sub Part. throughout document. . PTC/9-9-10 , the UML 2.3 Infrastructure convenience document has the changes of the tem .Part. to .Subpart., as per the resolution to ISSUE 14277 by the UML 2.3 RTF. However the published UML 2.3 Infrastructure reverted to the use of the term .Part.. Also, ISO document templates do not allow hanging text. The introductory text for each is not in any numbered clause. Proposed Resolution: Change term .Part. to .Subpart., as in PTC/9-9-10. Change title of section 6.2 to be .How to Read this Specificaton. as in PTC/9-9-10, and to be consistent with Superstructure. Add a new section 6.2.2 Contents of Subparts 6.2.2.1 Contents of Subpart I ­ Introduction 6.2.2.2 Contents of Subpart II ­ Infrastructure Library 6.2.2.3 Contents of Subpart III - Annexes