Issue 15823: Part document structures in Superstructure need to conform to ISO standard Document Template Conventions (uml2-rtf) Source: (Mr. Tom Rutt, nobody) Nature: Revision Severity: Minor Summary: Title: Part document structures in Superstructure need to conform to ISO standard Document Template Conventions Category: Editorial Nature of Problem UML 2.3 RTF resolved ISSUE 14296 as follows: “ “ Summary: This is a multipart standard, use of "Part I, II, III" make confusion. Delete Part III and Make others rewrite as clauses. 7. General Introduction, 10 Infrastructure Library, and renumber other clauses. Also, delete Part III page. Resolution: Agree to change word “Part” to “Sub Part” throughout document. “ PTC/9-9-08 , the UML 2.3 Superstructure convenience document has the changes of the tem “Part” to “Subpart”, as per the resolution to ISSUE However the published UML 2.3 Infrastructure reverted to the use of the term “Part”. Also, ISO document templates do not allow hanging text. The introductory text for each is not in any numbered clause. Proposed Resolution: Change term “Part” to “Subpart”, as in PTC/9-9-8. Add a new section 6.4.3 Contents of Subparts 6.4.3.1 Contents of Subpart I ­ Structure <move the hanging intro from Part I into this subclause, with minor edits to fix pointers to sections> 6.4.3.2 Contents of Subpart II ­ Behaviour <move the hanging intro from Part II into this subclause, with minor edits to fix pointers to sections> 6.4.3.3 Contents of Subpart III- Supplement <move the hanging intro from Part III into this subclause,> 6.4.3.4 Contents of Subpart IV - Annexes <move the hanging intro from Part IV into this subclause,> Resolution: Revised Text: Actions taken: November 22, 2010: received issue Discussion: End of Annotations:===== uthentication-Results: cm-omr4 smtp.user=tom@coastenterprises.com; auth=pass (PLAIN) X-Authenticated-UID: tom@coastenterprises.com Date: Sat, 20 Nov 2010 15:32:04 -0500 From: Tom Rutt Reply-To: tom@coastin.com User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Windows; U; Windows NT 5.1; en-US; rv:1.9.2.12) Gecko/20101027 Thunderbird/3.1.6 To: issues@omg.org, Juergen Boldt CC: Hiroshi Miyazaki , Tom Rutt , "uml2-rtf@omg.org" Subject: Two New Editorial Issues for UML 2.4 to Resolve ISO PAS Comments Here are two new editorial issues, which are required to resolve ISO PAS Ballot comments in UML 2. These should be assigned to the UML 2.4 RTF, so they can be resolved with UML 2.4 output. Tom New ISSUE yyyyyy UML 2.3 Superstructure Title: Part document structures in Superstructure need to conform to ISO standard Document Template Conventions Category: Editorial Nature of Problem UML 2.3 RTF resolved ISSUE 14296 as follows: . . Summary: This is a multipart standard, use of "Part I, II, III" make confusion. Delete Part III and Make others rewrite as clauses. 7. General Introduction, 10 Infrastructure Library, and renumber other clauses. Also, delete Part III page. Resolution: Agree to change word .Part. to .Sub Part. throughout document. . PTC/9-9-08 , the UML 2.3 Superstructure convenience document has the changes of the tem .Part. to .Subpart., as per the resolution to ISSUE However the published UML 2.3 Infrastructure reverted to the use of the term .Part.. Also, ISO document templates do not allow hanging text. The introductory text for each is not in any numbered clause. Proposed Resolution: Change term .Part. to .Subpart., as in PTC/9-9-8. Add a new section 6.4.3 Contents of Subparts 6.4.3.1 Contents of Subpart I ­ Structure 6.4.3.2 Contents of Subpart II ­ Behaviour 6.4.3.3 Contents of Subpart III- Supplement 6.4.3.4 Contents of Subpart IV - Annexes -- ---------------------------------------------------- Tom Rutt email: tom@coastin.com; trutt@us.fujitsu.com Tel: +1 732 801 5744 Fax: +1 732 774 5133