Issue 15922: typo in ptc/2010-11-42 and pas/2010-08-02 (ocl2-rtf) Source: Fujitsu (Mr. Hiroshi Miyazaki, miyazaki.hir-02(at)jp.fujitsu.com) Nature: Uncategorized Issue Severity: Summary: Regarding ptc/10-11-42 and pas/10-08-02, It seems to be typo. In ptc/10-11-42, 11.6.5, and in pas/10-08-02, 11.5.5 Threre is "A Sentence is not a subtype of Bag. The common supertype of Sentence and Bags is Collection." ^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^ These two "Sentence"s seem to be typo. Substitute "Sequence" for "Sentence". Resolution: Yes. Bags is also a typo and the English can be improved Revised Text: In 11.6.5 replace A Sentence is not a subtype of Bag. The common supertype of Sentence and Bags is Collection. by Sequence is not a subtype of Bag. The common supertype of Sequence and Bag is Collection Actions taken: January 10, 2011: received issue December 23, 2013: closed issue Discussion: End of Annotations:===== ecurityPolicyCheck-FJ: OK by FujitsuOutboundMailChecker v1.4.0 From: "Hiroshi Miyazaki" To: "Juergen Boldt" , Subject: OCL Issue Date: Tue, 11 Jan 2011 09:28:27 +0900 X-Mailer: Microsoft Outlook Express 6.00.2900.5931 Regarding ptc/10-11-42 and pas/10-08-02, It seems to be typo. In ptc/10-11-42, 11.6.5, and in pas/10-08-02, 11.5.5 Threre is "A Sentence is not a subtype of Bag. The common supertype of Sentence and Bags is Collection." ^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^ These two "Sentence"s seem to be typo. Substitute "Sequence" for "Sentence". X-CM-Score: 0.00 X-CNFS-Analysis: v=2.1 cv=Buukn+n5 c=1 sm=1 tr=0 a=eW53zEZrsyElcQ0NK1QpqA==:117 a=eW53zEZrsyElcQ0NK1QpqA==:17 a=0Bzu9jTXAAAA:8 a=AeFP_lyPgAIA:10 a=gq5BvNf-rzoA:10 a=8nJEP1OIZ-IA:10 a=YYzpnO7rAAAA:8 a=_StNLe1naTYA:10 a=oCcaPWc0AAAA:8 a=8_7LgYGBBE8L8NO2OPAA:9 a=wPNLvfGTeEIA:10 Date: Wed, 31 Jul 2013 17:00:44 +0100 From: Ed Willink User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Windows NT 6.0; rv:17.0) Gecko/20130620 Thunderbird/17.0.7 To: Adolfo Sáhez-Barbudo Herrera CC: "'ocl2-rtf@omg.org'" Subject: Re: OCL 2.4 Ballot 2 Preview 1 X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at omg.org Hi Adolfo Well spotted, but strictly speaking changing "Bags" to "Bag" is a new issue, but I think we can slide this one in for free. Regards Ed Willink On 31/07/2013 16:20, Adolfo Sáhez-Barbudo Herrera wrote: Feedback: - Easy harmless resolutions. - Revise Issue 15922: The replacement sentence has a typo. It should be Bag rather than Bags. Regards, Adolfo. On 31/07/2013 06:40, Ed Willink wrote: Hi Attached: Preview 2 of the Issues resolved in Ballot 2. The preview lasts from now until voting starts on 5th August. The two week voting period lasts from 5th August to 18th August. More details may be found in the preamble to the attached. Please note that the Ballot 1 Vote is still in progress. Please Vote. This overlapping preview contains only of very minor typos, the most dramatic of which is selecting between oclInState/oclIsInState. Regards Ed Willink ----- No virus found in this message. Checked by AVG - www.avg.com Version: 2013.0.3392 / Virus Database: 3209/6537 - Release Date: 07/30/13 From: Steve Cook To: Ed Willink , "'ocl2-rtf@omg.org'" Subject: RE: [OCL 2.4 RTF] Ballot 2 -- Please VOTE Thread-Topic: [OCL 2.4 RTF] Ballot 2 -- Please VOTE Thread-Index: AQHOkbxTn+0cbbIFvUez4J8wmvAuypmUs7lw Date: Wed, 14 Aug 2013 12:44:59 +0000 Accept-Language: en-GB, en-US X-MS-Has-Attach: X-MS-TNEF-Correlator: x-originating-ip: [10.166.18.104] X-Forefront-Antispam-Report: CIP:131.107.125.37;CTRY:US;IPV:CAL;IPV:NLI;EFV:NLI;SFV:NSPM;SFS:(13464003)(199002)(189002)(377454003)(69226001)(53806001)(54356001)(74876001)(16406001)(4396001)(20776003)(79102001)(81542001)(81342001)(54316002)(31966008)(74662001)(74502001)(81816001)(56816003)(47446002)(16796002)(46406003)(76482001)(74706001)(63696002)(80976001)(77096001)(50466002)(50986001)(56776001)(65816001)(55846006)(59766001)(74366001)(77982001)(51856001)(6806004)(23726002)(80022001)(19580395003)(49866001)(47736001)(47776003)(47976001)(83072001)(76796001)(19580405001)(83322001)(33656001)(46102001)(81686001)(44976005)(76786001)(491001);DIR:OUT;SFP:;SCL:1;SRVR:BLUPR03MB184;H:mail.microsoft.com;CLIP:131.107.125.37;RD:InfoDomainNonexistent;A:1;MX:1;LANG:en; X-O365ENT-EOP-Header: Message processed by - O365_ENT: Allow from ranges (Engineering ONLY) X-Forefront-PRVS: 0938781D02 X-OriginatorOrg: DuplicateDomain-a84fc36a-4ed7-4e57-ab1c-3e967bcbad48.microsoft.com X-MS-Exchange-CrossPremises-OriginalClientIPAddress: 131.107.125.37 X-MS-Exchange-CrossPremises-AuthSource: BN1BFFO11FD031.protection.gbl X-MS-Exchange-CrossPremises-AuthAs: Anonymous X-MS-Exchange-CrossPremises-AVStamp-Service: 1.0 X-MS-Exchange-CrossPremises-SCL: 1 X-MS-Exchange-CrossPremises-Antispam-ScanContext: DIR:Originating;SFV:NSPM;SKIP:0; X-MS-Exchange-CrossPremises-Processed-By-Journaling: Journal Agent X-OrganizationHeadersPreserved: BLUPR03MB184.namprd03.prod.outlook.com X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at omg.org X-MIME-Autoconverted: from quoted-printable to 8bit by amethyst.omg.org id r7ECkA1j030037 Microsoft votes YES to the entirety of Ballot 2. However, I suggest changing the revised text of 15922 to delete the initial "A" - "A Sequence is not a subtype of Bag" is probably true, but also probably not what you are attempting to say. If you made such a change my vote would still apply. Thanks -- Steve -----Original Message----- From: Ed Willink [mailto:ed@willink.me.uk] Sent: 05 August 2013 10:14 To: 'ocl2-rtf@omg.org' Subject: [OCL 2.4 RTF] Ballot 2 -- Please VOTE Hi Please find attached the final and official version of the Second OCL 2.4 RTF Ballot 2. (Only significant change since preview 2: Issue 7530 withdrawn). The voting period is: ==> Poll start date: Monday, 5 August 2013 (01:00 AM EDT - 06:00 GMT) ==> Poll closing date: Sunday, 18 August 2013 (7:00 PM EDT - 24:00 GMT) Details in the ballot front matter. Please not that ballot 1 is still open; plesase vote. Regards Ed Willink