Issue 16146: Japan PAS Ballot Comment 23 (ocl2-rtf) 10 Semantics Described Using UML (ocl2-rtf)
Source:  (Mr. Tom Rutt, nobody)
Nature: Uncategorized Issue
Severity: 
Summary: Main text. References like [Kleppe2001] and [Clark2000] are not appropriate in the main text of International Standards. Modify the text as appropriate
Resolution: Initial Comment/Suggestion: Modify the text as appropriate.
Comment: The explicit academic referenced may remain in the informative bibliography but
should not remain in the core document of the specification
Revised Text: (1) In 8.3.4, remove “See [Kleppe2000] for a complete description and motivation of this type of
expression, also called “action clause.”
(2) In OclMessageExpVal clause, replace “As explained in [Kleppe2000] the only demand..” by “The
only demand ..” ..
(3) In Section 10, remove the sentence:
I”t explains the semantics of OCL in a manner based on the report Unification of Static and Dynamic
Semantics for UML [Kleppe2001], which in its turn is based on the MML report [Clark2000].”
Actions taken:
April 20, 2011: received issue
January 11, 2012: closed issue
Discussion: 
See comment JP 23 in “…_JISC.doc”  file in http://www.omg.org/members/cgi-bin/doc?pas/11-03-03.zip
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Japan PAS Ballot Comment 23 (ocl2-rtf) 10 Semantics Described Using UML

Main text. References like [Kleppe2001] and [Clark2000] are not appropriate in the main text of International Standards. Modify the text as appropriate