Issue 16723: Suggestions for editorial changes (uml2-rtf) Source: (, ) Nature: Revision Severity: Minor Summary: Reading the document cited, I noticed some editorial errors. Thus, below you will find some suggestions for editorial changes. * Page 23, Section 8.3.2, first sentence: Instead of "are enumerated", it should probably read "is enumerated". * Page 48, section 9.8.3, subsection titled "Associations": Instead of "owning expression. Subsets", it should probably read "owning expression subsets". * Page 96, section 10.2.1, subsection titled "Semantics", second paragraph, first sentence: Instead of "features on another class", it should probably read "features of another class". * Page 98, section 10.2.5, subsection titled "Attributes", last bullet point, last sentence: Instead of "Default value", it should read "The default value". * Page 111, section 11.3.1, first paragraph, second and third sentences: A space character is missing between the two sentences. * Page 113, section 11.3.1, subsection titled "Semantics", sixth paragraph, first sentence: Instead of "characterized", it should read "characterizes". * Page 151, section 11.7.5, subsection titled "Examples": Instead of "imported WebShop", it should read "imported to WebShop". * Page 154, section 11.8.2, subsection titled "Constraints". Instead of "n operation", it should read "An operation". * Page 173, section 12, second paragraph, fifth paragraph: Instead of "profile?s", it should read "profile's". * Page 173, section 12, first numbered paragraph, last sentence: Instead of "more constraining", it should read "more constraining than". * Page 178, section 12.1.2, subsection titled "Semantics", first paragraph, last sentence: Instead of "at most", it should (probably?) read "at least". * Page 186, section 12.1.7, subsection titled "Semantics", last paragraph on page, last sentence: Instead of "and or", it should read "and/or". * Page 191, section 12.1.8, subsection titled "Semantics", first paragraph, fourth and fifth sentences: There seems to be a mistake on the boundary between the two sentences ("all its nested and imported."); probably, something is missing at the end of the fourth sentence after "imported". * Page 194, section 12.1.9, subsection titled "Semantics", third paragraph on page, second sentence: Instead of "theses stereotypes", it should read "these sstereotypes". * Page 194, section 12.1.9, subsection titled "Notation", third paragraph, first sentence: Instead of "stereotype?s", it should read "stereotype's". * Page 195, section 12.1.9, subsection titled "Presentation Options", first sentence on page: Instead of "may shown", it should read "may be shown". * Page 196, section 12.1.9, subsection titled "Examples", last paragraph on page, second sentence: Before "isRequired", opening quotation marks are missing. Resolution: Revised Text: Actions taken: November 25, 2011: received issue Discussion: End of Annotations:===== m: webmaster@omg.org Date: 25 Nov 2011 02:49:35 -0500 To: Subject: Issue/Bug Report ******************************************************************************* Name: Georg Lönger Employer: University of Vienna/Austrian Academy of Sciences mailFrom: georg.loeckinger@univie.ac.at Terms_Agreement: I agree Specification: OMG Unified Modeling LanguageTM (OMG UML), Infrastructure Section: various (see full description) FormalNumber: formal/2011-08-05 Version: 2.4.1 Doc_Year: 2011 Doc_Month: August Doc_Day: 05 Page: various (see full description) Title: Suggestions for editorial changes Nature: Revision Severity: Minor CODE: 3TMw8 B1: Report Issue Description: Dear Sir or Madam, Reading the document cited, I noticed some editorial errors. Thus, below you will find some suggestions for editorial changes. * Page 23, Section 8.3.2, first sentence: Instead of "are enumerated", it should probably read "is enumerated". * Page 48, section 9.8.3, subsection titled "Associations": Instead of "owning expression. Subsets", it should probably read "owning expression subsets". * Page 96, section 10.2.1, subsection titled "Semantics", second paragraph, first sentence: Instead of "features on another class", it should probably read "features of another class". * Page 98, section 10.2.5, subsection titled "Attributes", last bullet point, last sentence: Instead of "Default value", it should read "The default value". * Page 111, section 11.3.1, first paragraph, second and third sentences: A space character is missing between the two sentences. * Page 113, section 11.3.1, subsection titled "Semantics", sixth paragraph, first sentence: Instead of "characterized", it should read "characterizes". * Page 151, section 11.7.5, subsection titled "Examples": Instead of "imported WebShop", it should read "imported to WebShop". * Page 154, section 11.8.2, subsection titled "Constraints". Instead of "n operation", it should read "An operation". * Page 173, section 12, second paragraph, fifth paragraph: Instead of "profile?s", it should read "profile's". * Page 173, section 12, first numbered paragraph, last sentence: Instead of "more constraining", it should read "more constraining than". * Page 178, section 12.1.2, subsection titled "Semantics", first paragraph, last sentence: Instead of "at most", it should (probably?) read "at least". * Page 186, section 12.1.7, subsection titled "Semantics", last paragraph on page, last sentence: Instead of "and or", it should read "and/or". * Page 191, section 12.1.8, subsection titled "Semantics", first paragraph, fourth and fifth sentences: There seems to be a mistake on the boundary between the two sentences ("all its nested and imported."); probably, something is missing at the end of the fourth sentence after "imported". * Page 194, section 12.1.9, subsection titled "Semantics", third paragraph on page, second sentence: Instead of "theses stereotypes", it should read "these sstereotypes". * Page 194, section 12.1.9, subsection titled "Notation", third paragraph, first sentence: Instead of "stereotype?s", it should read "stereotype's". * Page 195, section 12.1.9, subsection titled "Presentation Options", first sentence on page: Instead of "may shown", it should read "may be shown". * Page 196, section 12.1.9, subsection titled "Examples", last paragraph on page, second sentence: Before "isRequired", opening quotation marks are missing. Best regards from Austria, Georg Lönger