Issue 16953: Typographical errors (data-distribution-interop-rtf)
Source: OCI (Mr. Adam Mitz, mitza(at)ociweb.com)
Nature: Revision
Severity: 
Summary: Section: 8.3.7.6.5
Page: 56
Change: In the expressions for reader and writer GUID, replace Heartbeat with HeartbeatFrag

Section: 8.3.7.9.6
Page: 59
Change: InfoTimestamp should be section 8.3.7.10, not 8.3.7.9.6 which makes it a part of the InfoSource submessage
Section: 8.4.7.5.1
Page: 81
Change: pseudocode line "IF ( DDS_FILTER"… is missing a ")" before "THEN"

Section: 8.4.13.2, Pgh 1, line 2
Page: 118
Change: "Endpoinst" should be "Endpoints"

Section: 8.4.13.5
Page: 119
Change: "ome" should be "one"

Section: 8.4.14.1.4, last bullet
Page: 121
Change: "of" should be "or"

Section: 8.4.15.7
Page: 123
Change: "sample logical" should be "same logical" (?)

Section: 8.7.1
Page: 140
Change: "WoS" should be "QoS"

Section: 8.7.4
Page: 145
Change: "Submessges" should be "Submessages", "PIM" should be "PSM", "teh" should be "the", "Data_Object" should be "Data-Object"
Section: 9.4.2.6
Page: 162
Change: A stray digit "1" appears to the left of expression that starts "(bitmap[deltaN/32]...".  Also, parentheses are unbalanced in this expression: there must be one additional ")" before the "=="
Section: 9.4.5.3.3, Paragraph 3
Page: 171
Change: Replace "skip any submessage headers" with "skip any submessage elements".  Replace "fule" with "rule".  Replace "the received will" with "the receiver will".
Section: 9.6.2.1
Page: 180
Change: replace "tpe" with "type"

Section: 9.6.2.2, Paragraph 6
Page: 181
Change: replace "teh" with "the"

Section: 9.6.2.2.2, Table 9.12
Page: 183
Change: for consistency replace "0x001A" with "0x001a"

Section: 9.6.3.3
Page: 191
Change: the paragraph that starts with "\Note" has a stray backslash

Resolution: 
Revised Text: 
Actions taken:
December 27, 2011: received issue
Discussion: 

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s is issue # 16953


Issues submission for OMG formal/2010-11-01, The Real-time Publish-Subscribe Wire Protocol DDS Interoperability Wire Protocol Specification (DDS-RTPS) Version 2.1

December 27, 2011
Adam Mitz (mitza@ociweb.com)
Senior Software Engineer
Object Computing, Inc. (OMG Member)


Typographical errors

Section: 8.3.7.6.5
Page: 56
Change: In the expressions for reader and writer GUID, replace Heartbeat with HeartbeatFrag

Section: 8.3.7.9.6
Page: 59
Change: InfoTimestamp should be section 8.3.7.10, not 8.3.7.9.6 which makes it a part of the InfoSource submessage
Section: 8.4.7.5.1
Page: 81
Change: pseudocode line "IF ( DDS_FILTER". is missing a ")" before "THEN"

Section: 8.4.13.2, Pgh 1, line 2
Page: 118
Change: "Endpoinst" should be "Endpoints"

Section: 8.4.13.5
Page: 119
Change: "ome" should be "one"

Section: 8.4.14.1.4, last bullet
Page: 121
Change: "of" should be "or"

Section: 8.4.15.7
Page: 123
Change: "sample logical" should be "same logical" (?)

Section: 8.7.1
Page: 140
Change: "WoS" should be "QoS"

Section: 8.7.4
Page: 145
Change: "Submessges" should be "Submessages", "PIM" should be "PSM", "teh" should be "the", "Data_Object" should be "Data-Object"

Section: 9.4.2.6
Page: 162
Change: A stray digit "1" appears to the left of expression that starts "(bitmap[deltaN/32]...".  Also, parentheses are unbalanced in this expression: there must be one additional ")" before the "=="

Section: 9.4.5.3.3, Paragraph 3
Page: 171
Change: Replace "skip any submessage headers" with "skip any submessage elements".  Replace "fule" with "rule".  Replace "the received will" with "the receiver will".

Section: 9.6.2.1
Page: 180
Change: replace "tpe" with "type"

Section: 9.6.2.2, Paragraph 6
Page: 181
Change: replace "teh" with "the"

Section: 9.6.2.2.2, Table 9.12
Page: 183
Change: for consistency replace "0x001A" with "0x001a"

Section: 9.6.3.3
Page: 191
Change: the paragraph that starts with "\Note" has a stray backslash