Issue 17068: Simplification of presentation of Annex E (sbvr-rtf) Source: Rule ML Initiative (Mr. John Hall, john.hall(at)modelsystems.co.uk) Nature: Revision Severity: Significant Summary: The value of a comprehensive and coherent SBVR example seems to be generally accepted, but there have been some concerns expressed about the size and complexity of the EU-Rent example (Annex E). Section E.2.2.1.1 Car Movement is a particular problem. It is presented first in the detail of EU-Rent‘s vocabulary but is quite complex. It introduces the idea of ‘car movement’, a component that is used in two different contexts ­ as part of the definition of a rental, and as part of the definition of a logistical car movement made by a EU-Rent employee. Annex E could be made more digestible, without substantially changing its content, by: 1) Presenting the sections in a different sequence, with sections that introduce simpler ideas presented earlier. 2) Presenting ‘car movement’ in a simpler form This issue can be resolved alongside Issue 10628: Align Annex E with the normative text. To avoid delay in updating the SBVR specification, updating EU-Rent to comply with the SBVR Date-Time Vocabulary is outside the scope of this issue, and will be addressed later. Resolution: Revised Text: Actions taken: January 27, 2012: received issue Discussion: End of Annotations:===== m: webmaster@omg.org To: Subject: Issue/Bug Report ******************************************************************************* Name: John Hall Employer: RuleML mailFrom: john.hall@modelsystems.co.uk Terms_Agreement: Specification: SBVR Section: Annex E FormalNumber: 2008-01-02 Version: 1.0 Doc_Year: 2008 Doc_Month: January Doc_Day: 31 Page: 267 - 341 Title: Simplification of presentation of Annex E Nature: Revision Severity: Significant CODE: 3TMw8 B1: Report Issue Description: The value of a comprehensive and coherent SBVR example seems to be generally accepted, but there have been some concerns expressed about the size and complexity of the EU-Rent example (Annex E). Section E.2.2.1.1 Car Movement is a particular problem. It is presented first in the detail of EU-Rent.s vocabulary but is quite complex. It introduces the idea of .car movement., a component that is used in two different contexts ­ as part of the definition of a rental, and as part of the definition of a logistical car movement made by a EU-Rent employee. Annex E could be made more digestible, without substantially changing its content, by: 1) Presenting the sections in a different sequence, with sections that introduce simpler ideas presented earlier. 2) Presenting .car movement. in a simpler form This issue can be resolved alongside Issue 10628: Align Annex E with the normative text. Subject: Re: [SBVR 1.2 RTF] -- Issue 17068 vs. 10638 From: keri Date: Tue, 26 Mar 2013 10:23:26 -1000 Cc: "Ronald G. Ross" , Donald Chapin , sbvr-rtf To: John Hall X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.1085) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at omg.org X-Brightmail-Tracker: AAAAAR1d8oI= X-Brightmail-Tracker: AAAAAA== John, I have been filing the EU-Rent issue work under Issue 17068. It that issue still active? If so, is it considered 'bundled' with 10638? Thanks. ~ Keri On Mar 26, 2013, at 9:03 AM, John Hall wrote: Andrew first asked if there is an RTF issue to update the Annex. I said that there is: Issue 10628: Align Annex E with the normative text Date: Tue, 26 Mar 2013 21:08:28 +0000 From: John Hall User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Windows NT 6.1; WOW64; rv:6.0.2) Gecko/20110902 Thunderbird/6.0.2 To: keri CC: "Ronald G. Ross" , Donald Chapin , sbvr-rtf Subject: Re: [SBVR 1.2 RTF] -- Issue 17068 vs. 10638 X-Mailcore-Auth: 4600872 X-Mailcore-Domain: 13170 X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at omg.org X-Brightmail-Tracker: AAAAAA== X-Brightmail-Tracker: AAAAAA== Keri, 17068 is particularly concerned with the complexity of 'car movement' in the current Annex E. 10638 is the broader issue. Bringing in the subset of DTV and clarifying the relationship between 'rental' (a contract) and the contracted service (a given car movement for an agreed rental price) made it easier to simplify 'car movement'. I need to write up a disposition for 17068 saying that it has been resolved as part of 10638 (or merged into 10638). John On 26/03/2013 20:23, keri wrote: John, I have been filing the EU-Rent issue work under Issue 17068. It that issue still active? If so, is it considered 'bundled' with 10638? Thanks. ~ Keri On Mar 26, 2013, at 9:03 AM, John Hall wrote: Andrew first asked if there is an RTF issue to update the Annex. I said that there is: Issue 10628: Align Annex E with the normative text X-Forefront-Antispam-Report: CIP:157.56.253.69;KIP:(null);UIP:(null);IPV:NLI;H:DB3PRD0210HT001.eurprd02.prod.outlook.com;RD:none;EFVD:NLI X-SpamScore: -19 X-BigFish: PS-19(z21cR551bizc89bh936eIdbeeh113bMc857h12d5I13e6Kzz1f42h1ee6h1de0h1fdah1202h1e76h1d1ah1d2ah1fc6hzz17326ah18c673h18602eh186068h8275bh1b9c21h8275dhz2dh2a8h668h839hd24he5bhf0ah1249h1288h12a5h12bdh137ah139eh1441h1504h1537h162dh1631h1758h17f1h1898h18e1h1946h19b5h19ceh1ad9h1b0ah1bceh1bfbh1c97h1d0ch1d2eh1d3fh1d61h34h1155h) From: Donald Chapin To: Subject: RE: issue 17068 -- SBVR RTF issue Date: Fri, 10 May 2013 21:07:05 +0100 X-Mailer: Microsoft Outlook 14.0 Thread-Index: AQIfpRokpwz5njZZ4oAZr5cyFDuAY5hcJ1Cw X-Originating-IP: [81.149.51.65] X-OriginatorOrg: businesssemantics.com X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at omg.org X-Brightmail-Tracker: AAAAAA== X-Brightmail-Tracker: AAAAAA== All . Attached you will find a change-tracked update to the version of Annex E sent out on February 20th. There has been no change to the substance of what was sent out on February 20th. Rather the changes are the result of corrections of typos, minor inconsistencies and loose ends identified during the import of Annex E SBVR Structured English by the same software that is used to import the SBVR and Date-Time Vocabulary specifications and produce their machine readable files. Some additional synonymous forms have been added to behavioral rules, illustrating more business-friendly representation. In addition, feedback from SBVR RTF participants is included in the changes. Also attached are the resolutions for SBVR Issue 17068, and Issue 10628 which is merged into Issue 17068. These two Issue Resolutions are ready for ballot which will go out the middle of next week. Donald From: Juergen Boldt [mailto:juergen@omg.org] Sent: 27 January 2012 13:47 To: issues@omg.org; sbvr-rtf@omg.org Subject: issue 17068 -- SBVR RTF issue From: webmaster@omg.org Date: 27 Jan 2012 08:09:44 -0500 To: Subject: Issue/Bug Report ******************************************************************************* Name: John Hall Employer: RuleML mailFrom: john.hall@modelsystems.co.uk Terms_Agreement: Specification: SBVR Section: Annex E FormalNumber: 2008-01-02 Version: 1.0 Doc_Year: 2008 Doc_Month: January Doc_Day: 31 Page: 267 - 341 Title: Simplification of presentation of Annex E Nature: Revision Severity: Significant CODE: 3TMw8 B1: Report Issue Description: The value of a comprehensive and coherent SBVR example seems to be generally accepted, but there have been some concerns expressed about the size and complexity of the EU-Rent example (Annex E). Section E.2.2.1.1 Car Movement is a particular problem. It is presented first in the detail of EU-Rents vocabulary but is quite complex. It introduces the idea of car movement, a component that is used in two different contexts as part of the definition of a rental, and as part of the definition of a logistical car movement made by a EU-Rent employee. Annex E could be made more digestible, without substantially changing its content, by: 1) Presenting the sections in a different sequence, with sections that introduce simpler ideas presented earlier. 2) Presenting car movement in a simpler form This issue can be resolved alongside Issue 10628: Align Annex E with the normative text. To avoid delay in updating the SBVR specification, updating EU-Rent to comply with the SBVR Date-Time Vocabulary is outside the scope of this issue, and will be addressed later. 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