Issue 17339: TIME model overview: consistency of bullet descriptions (marte-rtf)
Source:  (, )
Nature: Clarification
Severity: Minor
Summary: problem:
In section Overview of the time model chapter, there are three bullets to describe the time. In these bullet titles, the slash ('/') character has different meaning: 


  * Causal/temporal --> it should be understood as causal vs temporal
  * Clocked/synchronous --> it should be understood as Clocked or synchronous
  * Physical/real-time --> it should be understood as Physical or real-time



proposed resolution:


the bullet should be renamed with:


        * Causal (untimed):
        * Synchronous (partially timed):
        * Physical (real-time):


additionally, to keep consistency, the last sentence of the last bullet should be rephrased, for instance with :
"Physical time models refine the partially timed models by adding reference(s) to one or more physical dimensions, for instance to derive the admissible speed of a reaction."
Resolution: 
Revised Text: 
Actions taken:
April 27, 2012: received issue
Discussion: 

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Date: 27 Apr 2012 04:40:53 -0400
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Name:            Julien DeAntoni
Employer:        UNS / I3S / INRIA
mailFrom:        julien.deantoni@inria.fr
Terms_Agreement: I agree
Specification:   MARTE
Section:         9.1
FormalNumber:     ptc/2010-08-32
Version:         1.1
Doc_Year:        2010
Doc_Month:       September
Doc_Day:         01
Page:            57
Title:           TIME model overview: consistency of bullet descriptions
Nature:          Clarification
Severity:        Minor
CODE:            3TMw8
B1:              Report Issue


Description:


problem:
In section Overview of the time model chapter, there are three bullets to describe the time. In these bullet titles, the slash ('/') character has different meaning: 


  * Causal/temporal --> it should be understood as causal vs temporal
  * Clocked/synchronous --> it should be understood as Clocked or synchronous
  * Physical/real-time --> it should be understood as Physical or real-time



proposed resolution:


the bullet should be renamed with:


        * Causal (untimed):
        * Synchronous (partially timed):
        * Physical (real-time):


additionally, to keep consistency, the last sentence of the last bullet should be rephrased, for instance with :
"Physical time models refine the partially timed models by adding reference(s) to one or more physical dimensions, for instance to derive the admissible speed of a reaction."