Issue 17770: Sentence does not make sense (uml25-ftf)
Source: Lockheed Martin (Mr. Michael Jesse Chonoles, michael_chonoles2(at)omg.org)
Nature: Revision
Severity: Significant
Summary: Sentence beginning paragraph 
The base behavioral semantics of UML builds on this structural foundation, addressing both the basic framework of the execution of behaviors and such execution may result….

The use of both in this sentence prepare the reader for two semi-parallel items. The sentence does not have such. 

Proposed Resolution:
Redo sentence to discuss the behavioral section of the diagram Figure 6.1

Resolution: 
Revised Text: 
Actions taken:
September 25, 2012: received issue
Discussion: 

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s is issue # 17770

Problem: 6.045

Severity: Significant
Type: Revision
Location: After Figure 6.1 Semantic Areas of UML p 19
Title: Sentence does not make sense. 
Description:
Sentence beginning paragraph 
The base behavioral semantics of UML builds on this structural foundation, addressing both the basic framework of the execution of behaviors and such execution may result..
 
The use of both in this sentence prepare the reader for two semi-parallel items. The sentence does not have such. 
 
Proposed Resolution:
Redo sentence to discuss the behavioral section of the diagram Figure 6.1
 
Source: Michael Jesse Chonoles  / from dave.hawkins@oracle.com