Issue 17950: Location: Page 265, 12.2.3 Semantics PackageMerge - Long-winded package merge description (uml25-ftf)
Source: Oracle (Mr. Dave Hawkins, dave.hawkins(at)oracle.com)
Nature: Revision
Severity: Minor
Summary: The paragraph starting "A PackageMerge can be viewed..." is a bit long-winded and contains lots of parentheses.

Proposed Resolution:

Simplify text, removing parentheses:

A PackageMerge can be viewed as a set of transformations whereby the contents of the merged Package and the receiving Package are combined. Matching elements are merged into a single resulting element according to the formal rules of PackageMerge specified below. This is akin to “copying down” the features of superclasses into a subclass: the fully expanded subclass is the equivalent to the resulting package

Resolution: 
Revised Text: 
Actions taken:
September 27, 2012: received issue
Discussion: 

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s is issue # 17950

Problem: 12.004

Severity: Minor
Nature: Revision
Location: Page 265, 12.2.3 Semantics PackageMerge
Title: Long-winded package merge description
Summary:
 
The paragraph starting "A PackageMerge can be viewed..." is a bit long-winded and contains lots of parentheses.
 
Proposed Resolution:
 
Simplify text, removing parentheses:
 
A PackageMerge can be viewed as a set of transformations whereby the contents of the merged Package and the receiving Package are combined. Matching elements are merged into a single resulting element according to the formal rules of PackageMerge specified below. This is akin to .copying down. the features of superclasses into a subclass: the fully expanded subclass is the equivalent to the resulting package.
 
Revised Text:
Date: 19th July 2012
Source: dave.hawkins@oracle.com