Issue 17978: Location: Page 330, 331, 333, 14.2.3, Page 347, 14.2.4, Page 375, 14.5 PseudostateKind (uml25-ftf)
Source: oose Innovative Informatik GmbH (Mr. Axel Scheithauer, axel.scheithauer(at)oose.de)
Nature: Revision
Severity: Significant
Summary: Title: History State described multiple times  
Summary The History State is described here: 
State history (p. 330)
Entering a state (p. 331)
PseudostateKind (p. 333)
History State Notation (p. 347)
PseudoStateKind classifier description (p 357).

Though it is OK to have descriptions in the various predefined sections, it seems that in this case I need to read all places to fully understand the history state. 
On other occasions the wording is slightly different (e.g., containing state-owning state), so that the reader wonders, whether there is a different meaning. 
On page 333 the description of deepHistory is incomplete: It doesn’t describe the default history state. This is described at other places, but not describing it here misleads the reader to think, that only shallowHistory has this feature.  

Proposed Res Reduce the number of places. Focus the description on the purpose of the section, hyperlink to other parts of the description where necessary.  
 
Source: axel.scheithauer@oose.de  

Resolution: 
Revised Text: 
Actions taken:
September 27, 2012: received issue
Discussion: 

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s is issue # 17978

Problem: 14.010

Severity Significant  
Nature Revision  
Location: Page 330, 331, 333, 14.2.3, Page 347, 14.2.4, Page 375, 14.5 PseudostateKind  
Title: History State described multiple times  
Summary The History State is described here: 
State history (p. 330)
Entering a state (p. 331)
PseudostateKind (p. 333)
History State Notation (p. 347)
PseudoStateKind classifier description (p 357).
 
Though it is OK to have descriptions in the various predefined sections, it seems that in this case I need to read all places to fully understand the history state. 
On other occasions the wording is slightly different (e.g., containing state-owning state), so that the reader wonders, whether there is a different meaning. 
On page 333 the description of deepHistory is incomplete: It doesn.t describe the default history state. This is described at other places, but not describing it here misleads the reader to think, that only shallowHistory has this feature.  
 
Proposed Res Reduce the number of places. Focus the description on the purpose of the section, hyperlink to other parts of the description where necessary.  
 
Source: axel.scheithauer@oose.de