Issue 18598:  Clause 10 needs a detailed review by a good English writer. (cvl-ftf)
Source: Microsoft (Mr. Steve Cook, stcook(at)microsoft.com)
Nature: Revision
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Summary: 10.2 starts “On this part” meaning “In this part”.  Has the author changed in clause 10?  The English has deteriorated significantly.  Clause 10 needs a detailed review by a good English writer.

 


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March 22, 2013: received issue
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s is issue # 18598

 Clause 10 needs a detailed review by a good English writer.

10.2 starts .On this part. meaning .In this part..  Has the author changed in clause 10?  The English has deteriorated significantly.  Clause 10 needs a detailed review by a good English writer.