Issue 18602: Descriptions have a lot of text and are sometimes redundant (cvl-ftf)
Source: Microsoft (Mr. Steve Cook, stcook(at)microsoft.com)
Nature: Revision
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Summary: 11.2.11.1 and similar sections: Description is a lot of text which is redundant with earlier descriptions.  These descriptions in the model should be terser and defer detail to the main explanation.  11.2.16.1 is a particularly bad example.
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March 22, 2013: received issue
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This is issue # 18602

Descriptions have a lot of text and are sometimes redundant

11.11.1 and similar sections: Description is a lot of text which is redundant with earlier descriptions.  These descriptions in the model should be terser and defer detail to the main explanation.  11.2.16.1 is a particularly bad example.