Issue 19279: Typos, grammatical errors, and style issues (odm-rtf) Source: Institute for Defense Analyses (Dr. Steven Wartik, swartik(at)ida.org) Nature: Clarification Severity: Minor Summary: This is a bulk report of minor problems I've identified in the specification. The following is a CSV-format list that can be read by a spreadsheet application. Page,Location,Problem,Fix 38,"Section 10.2.6, Description, paragraph 1","""RFC3986"" should be ""RFC 3986"", consistent with ""RFC 3987"" in the same paragraph.", 38,"Section 10.2.6, Description, paragraph 2","""RFC3986"" should be ""RFC 3986"".", 38,"Section 10.2.5, Constraints, paragraph 1, sentence 2","""However, in any case"" is redundant.","Replace ""However, in any case,"" with ""However,""." 44,"Section 10.5.2, Semantics, paragraph 2",The sentence beginning on the third line is run-in and the second part is incomplete.,"Change the sentence to ""Such features may in the future be provided to support, for example, more elaborate datatype conditions.""" 50,"Section 10.8, paragraph 1",Replace hyphen with dash in line 3., 50,"Section 10.8, paragraph 1",Missing comma.,"Change ""prefixes and URIs"" to ""prefixes and IRIs,""." 51,Last paragraph,Missing period at end of sentence., 53,"Section 10.8.2, Description, paragraph 1","The article modifying ""IRI"" is incorrect.","Change ""a IRI"" to ""an IRI""." 54,"Section 10.8.2, Constraints",Remove the quotation marks around [XMLNS]., 56,"Section 10.8.8, Associations, bullet 1","Change ""NameSpace"" to ""Namespace"". Missing period at end of sentence.", 73,"Section 11.3.8.1, Description, First paragraph",Missing period at end of last sentence., 77,"Section 11.3.8.9, Constraints, paragraph 1",Missing period at end of sentence., 82,"Section 11.5, title",Replace hyphen with dash., 83,"Section 11.6, paragraph 2",The first sentence is run-in.,"Change ""data values,"" to ""data values:""." 173,"Section 14.2.5, paragraph 1","On the last line, replace ""classes,"" with ""classes"".", 174,"Section 14.2.5.1, Description, paragraph 2, sentence 1",The use of passive voice reduces specificity.,"Change owl:Class is defined as a subclass of rdfs:Class. to [OWL SS&FS] defines owl:Class as a subclass of rdfs:Class." 199,"Section 14.2.6.3, Description, paragraph 1",The first sentence is missing a comma.,"Change ""in the profile"" to ""in the profile,""." 207,"Section 14.2.7.5, Description, paragraph 1","The use of commas in the first sentence decreases readability: it's not immediately obvious how to read ""OWL properties"".","Change ""OWL properties"" to ""OWL, properties""." 207,"Section 14.2.7.5, Stereotype and Base Class, paragraph 1",The first sentence is run-in.,"Change ""No stereotype,"" to ""No stereotype;""." Resolution: Revised Text: Actions taken: March 6, 2014: received issue Discussion: End of Annotations:===== vered-To: spamcop-net-omg4web@spamcop.net X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.2.4 (2008-01-01) on filter8 X-Spam-Level: ** X-Spam-Status: hits=2.8 tests=WEIRD_QUOTING version=3.2.4 From: webmaster@omg.org Date: 06 Mar 2014 15:18:25 -0500 To: Subject: Issue/Bug Report X-SpamCop-Checked: 23.30.177.17 23.30.177.16 ******************************************************************************* Name: Steven Wartik Employer: Institute for Defense Analyses mailFrom: swartik@ida.org Terms_Agreement: I agree Specification: Ontology Definition Metamodel Section: Various FormalNumber: ptc/2013-12-03 Version: 1.1 Beta 1 Doc_Year: 2014 Doc_Month: February Doc_Day: 10 Page: Various Title: Typos, grammatical errors, and style issues Nature: Clarification Severity: Minor CODE: 3TMw8 B1: Report Issue Remote Name: sk.s2.ns1.ns12.kolmic.com Remote User: HTTP User Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Windows NT 6.1; WOW64; rv:27.0) Gecko/20100101 Firefox/27.0 Time: 03:18 PM Description: This is a bulk report of minor problems I've identified in the specification. The following is a CSV-format list that can be read by a spreadsheet application. Page,Location,Problem,Fix 38,"Section 10.2.6, Description, paragraph 1","""RFC3986"" should be ""RFC 3986"", consistent with ""RFC 3987"" in the same paragraph.", 38,"Section 10.2.6, Description, paragraph 2","""RFC3986"" should be ""RFC 3986"".", 38,"Section 10.2.5, Constraints, paragraph 1, sentence 2","""However, in any case"" is redundant.","Replace ""However, in any case,"" with ""However,""." 44,"Section 10.5.2, Semantics, paragraph 2",The sentence beginning on the third line is run-in and the second part is incomplete.,"Change the sentence to ""Such features may in the future be provided to support, for example, more elaborate datatype conditions.""" 50,"Section 10.8, paragraph 1",Replace hyphen with dash in line 3., 50,"Section 10.8, paragraph 1",Missing comma.,"Change ""prefixes and URIs"" to ""prefixes and IRIs,""." 51,Last paragraph,Missing period at end of sentence., 53,"Section 10.8.2, Description, paragraph 1","The article modifying ""IRI"" is incorrect.","Change ""a IRI"" to ""an IRI""." 54,"Section 10.8.2, Constraints",Remove the quotation marks around [XMLNS]., 56,"Section 10.8.8, Associations, bullet 1","Change ""NameSpace"" to ""Namespace"". Missing period at end of sentence.", 73,"Section 11.3.8.1, Description, First paragraph",Missing period at end of last sentence., 77,"Section 11.3.8.9, Constraints, paragraph 1",Missing period at end of sentence., 82,"Section 11.5, title",Replace hyphen with dash., 83,"Section 11.6, paragraph 2",The first sentence is run-in.,"Change ""data values,"" to ""data values:""." 173,"Section 14.2.5, paragraph 1","On the last line, replace ""classes,"" with ""classes"".", 174,"Section 14.2.5.1, Description, paragraph 2, sentence 1",The use of passive voice reduces specificity.,"Change owl:Class is defined as a subclass of rdfs:Class. to [OWL SS&FS] defines owl:Class as a subclass of rdfs:Class." 199,"Section 14.2.6.3, Description, paragraph 1",The first sentence is missing a comma.,"Change ""in the profile"" to ""in the profile,""." 207,"Section 14.2.7.5, Description, paragraph 1","The use of commas in the first sentence decreases readability: it's not immediately obvious how to read ""OWL properties"".","Change ""OWL properties"" to ""OWL, properties""." 207,"Section 14.2.7.5, Stereotype and Base Class, paragraph 1",The first sentence is run-in.,"Change ""No stereotype,"" to ""No stereotype;""."