Issue 5917: Text of the Specification: (PSM) (lwlog-ftf)
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Nature: Uncategorized Issue
Severity: 
Summary: Page 3-2, Section 3.2 at the top omits any mapping to the
Platform Specific Model of the PIM section 2.2.1 InvalidParam
exception.  The appropriate text needs to be added.
(Since the actual IDL is mostly derived from the Section 3.2
details, this omission apparently led to the omission of the
exception declaration from the IDL, cited above.)

Page 3-3, section 3.2.4, remove syntax error
from:
         enum LogFullAction (WRAP, HALT);
to:
         enum LogFullAction {WRAP, HALT};

Page 3-5, section 3.2.7 has a wrong-word problem in the PSM code.
change:
           <ProducerLogRecordType
to:
           <ProducerLogRecord

Page 3-5, section 3.2.7, the Description box for producerID has
some residual cut-and-paste text from the SCA that needs to be
removed or revised.  The questionable text is:
     "SCA Resource and Core Framework"

Page 3-6, section 3.2.9 has another code-level wrong word problem.
change:
          <LogRecordType
to:
          <LogRecord

Page 3-11, end of section 3.3.1.4, add the missing preposition.
change:
          "signature the equivalent"
to:
          "signature to the equivalent"

Page 3-15, section 3.3.3 contains two kinds of problems at the
code level.
   (1) LogProducerRecord  &  LogProducerRecordSequence
     are word-transposition misnomers for
       ProducerLogRecord  &  ProducerLogRecordSequence
   (2) The desired sequence has already been more properly defined
     in section 3.2.7 earlier.

Page 3-19, section 3.3.4.3 needed to replace all the
full-upper-uppercase references to LOCKED & UNLOCKED by
their full-lower-case equivalents locked & unlocked, as per
section 3.2.2 and per the manner of usage in section 3.3.1.6

Resolution: 
Revised Text: 
Actions taken:
April 23, 2003: received issue
Discussion: 

End of Annotations:=====
4th issue
Text of the Specification: (PSM)

Page 3-2, Section 3.2 at the top omits any mapping to the
Platform Specific Model of the PIM section 2.2.1 InvalidParam
exception.  The appropriate text needs to be added.
(Since the actual IDL is mostly derived from the Section 3.2
details, this omission apparently led to the omission of the
exception declaration from the IDL, cited above.)

Page 3-3, section 3.2.4, remove syntax error
from:
         enum LogFullAction (WRAP, HALT);
to:
         enum LogFullAction {WRAP, HALT};

Page 3-5, section 3.2.7 has a wrong-word problem in the PSM code.
change:
           <ProducerLogRecordType
to:
           <ProducerLogRecord

Page 3-5, section 3.2.7, the Description box for producerID has
some residual cut-and-paste text from the SCA that needs to be
removed or revised.  The questionable text is:
     "SCA Resource and Core Framework"

Page 3-6, section 3.2.9 has another code-level wrong word problem.
change:
          <LogRecordType
to:
          <LogRecord

Page 3-11, end of section 3.3.1.4, add the missing preposition.
change:
          "signature the equivalent"
to:
          "signature to the equivalent"

Page 3-15, section 3.3.3 contains two kinds of problems at the
code level.
   (1) LogProducerRecord  &  LogProducerRecordSequence
     are word-transposition misnomers for
       ProducerLogRecord  &  ProducerLogRecordSequence
   (2) The desired sequence has already been more properly defined
     in section 3.2.7 earlier.

Page 3-19, section 3.3.4.3 needed to replace all the
full-upper-uppercase references to LOCKED & UNLOCKED by
their full-lower-case equivalents locked & unlocked, as per
section 3.2.2 and per the manner of usage in section 3.3.1.6

end 4th issu


Issue 5917: Text of the Specification: (PSM) (lwlog-ftf)

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Nature: Uncategorized Issue
Severity: 
Summary: 

Page 3-2, Section 3.2 at the top omits any mapping to the
Platform Specific Model of the PIM section 2.2.1 InvalidParam
exception.  The appropriate text needs to be added.
(Since the actual IDL is mostly derived from the Section 3.2
details, this omission apparently led to the omission of the
exception declaration from the IDL, cited above.)

Page 3-3, section 3.2.4, remove syntax error
from:
         enum LogFullAction (WRAP, HALT);
to:
         enum LogFullAction {WRAP, HALT};

(The Version posted on the Issues site is truncated)

Page 3-5, section 3.2.7 has a wrong-word problem in the PSM code.
change:
           <ProducerLogRecordType
to:
           <ProducerLogRecord

Page 3-5, section 3.2.7, the Description box for producerID has
some residual cut-and-paste text from the SCA that needs to be
removed or revised.  The questionable text is:
     "SCA Resource and Core Framework"

Page 3-6, section 3.2.9 has another code-level wrong word problem.
change:
          <LogRecordType
to:
          <LogRecord

Page 3-11, end of section 3.3.1.4, add the missing preposition.
change:
          "signature the equivalent"
to:
          "signature to the equivalent"

Page 3-15, section 3.3.3 contains two kinds of problems at the
code level.
   (1) LogProducerRecord  &  LogProducerRecordSequence
     are word-transposition misnomers for
       ProducerLogRecord  &  ProducerLogRecordSequence
   (2) The desired sequence has already been more properly defined
     in section 3.2.7 earlier.

Page 3-19, section 3.3.4.3 needed to replace all the
full-upper-uppercase references to LOCKED & UNLOCKED by
their full-lower-case equivalents locked & unlocked, as per
section 3.2.2 and per the manner of usage in section 3.3.1.6

           

Resolution: 

Revised Text: 

Actions taken:

April 23, 2003: received issue

Proposed Resolution - Accept the recommendations as indicated below

Proposed Revised Text -
In the document Lightweight Log Service Specification - OMG Final Adopted Specification ptc/03/04/01
Add a new section 3.2.1 and adjust the existing numbering accordingly
3.2.1 InvalidParam Exception
exception InvalidParam { string details; };

The InvalidParam exception indicates that a provided parameter was invalid. Details
about the cause for this exception are delivered in the string attribute details.
Mapping from the Platform Independent Model
This IDL exception is the result of a one-to-one mapping from the UML classifier InvalidParam (stereotyped as <<exception>>), described in section 2.2.1, "InvalidParam exception," on page 2-4.

Difference to the Telecom Log Service
This IDL exception is identical to the corresponding definition in the Telecom Log Service.

Page 3-3, section 3.2.4, Change 
FROM:
         enum LogFullAction (WRAP, HALT);
TO:
         enum LogFullAction {WRAP, HALT};


Page 3-5, section 3.2.7 Change.
FROM:
           <ProducerLogRecordType>
TO:
           <ProducerLogRecord>

Page 3-5, section 3.2.7, the Description box for producerID, Change
FROM: 
"is unique for each SCA Resource and Core Framework"
TO:
"should be unique for each log record producing"

Page 3-6, section 3.2.9 Change.
FROM:
          <LogRecordType>
TO:
          <LogRecord>

Page 3-11, end of section 3.3.1.4, Change
FROM:
          "signature the equivalent"
TO:
          "signature to the equivalent"

Page 3-15, section 3.3.3 
REMOVE:
"typedef sequence<LogProducerRecord> LogProducerRecordSequence;

Page 3-19, section 3.3.4.3 Change
REPLACE:
All occurrences of "LOCKED" and "UNLOCKED" with "locked" and "unlocked"