Issue 6164: UML Superstructure: 03-08-02 -- typos (uml2-superstructure-ftf) Source: oose Innovative Informatik eG (Mr. Tim Weilkiens, tim.weilkiens(at)oose.de) Nature: Uncategorized Issue Severity: Summary: p. 32, 2nd/3rd semantics paragraph "element" instead of "ele-ment" (twice) "qualified" instead of "qual-ified" p.38, presentation options: "identifies" instead of "identi-fies" p. 108, fig. 53: "<<dependencyName>>" instead of "<<dependecyName>>" p. 109, fig. 54: "An example of a instantiate dependency" instead of "An example of a instantiatedependency" p. 110, Description: First and second paragraph are the same. p. 114, 3rd line: "...mapping to a property of..." instead of "...mapping to a propertyof..." p. 117, fig. 65: Class name is "DoorBell" instead of "oorBell" p. 137, last paragraph, first line: "...by a component that offers equivalent..." instead of "...by a component that offers that offers equivalent..." p. 170, first line: "...while the figure on the right..." instead of "...while the figure onj the right..." p. 172, semantics paragraph: Reference to ""StructuredClassifier" on page 171" seems to be wrong (twice) p. 325, stream description: "..., in order of..." instead of "..., in oprder of..." p. 403, last but one paragraph: "...UML language..." instead of "...UML languatge..." p. 537, PrimitiveTypes, first paragraph: "These include primitive types..." instead of "These includes prmitive types..." p. 587, paragraph below fig. 460, last line: "..., the heading is..." instead of "..., the headning is..." Resolution: see above Revised Text: Actions taken: September 2, 2003: received issue March 8, 2005: closed issue Discussion: I have verified each of these items, and they are indeed valid recommendations. The proposed resolution is to make the text changes exactly as cited in the issue text with the exception of the item identified as: p. 110, Description: First and second paragraph are the same. The problem is not that the two paragraphs are the same since they are slightly different, but that the first of the two paragraphs is clearly a corrected version of the second, which contains several typing and spelling errors. Therefore, the recommended action on this item is to remove the second paragraph. End of Annotations:===== ubject: UML Superstructure: 03-08-02 / Typos Date: Tue, 2 Sep 2003 12:59:18 +0200 X-MS-Has-Attach: X-MS-TNEF-Correlator: Thread-Topic: UML Superstructure: 03-08-02 / Typos Thread-Index: AcNxQUGbo0RpRBYsShW699FTF04EwA== From: "Tim Weilkiens" To: X-MIME-Autoconverted: from quoted-printable to 8bit by amethyst.omg.org id h82AwMe4016772 UML Superstructure: 03-08-02 Some typos: p. 32, 2nd/3rd semantics paragraph "element" instead of "ele-ment" (twice) "qualified" instead of "qual-ified" p.38, presentation options: "identifies" instead of "identi-fies" p. 108, fig. 53: "<>" instead of "<>" p. 109, fig. 54: "An example of a instantiate dependency" instead of "An example of a instantiatedependency" p. 110, Description: First and second paragraph are the same. p. 114, 3rd line: "...mapping to a property of..." instead of "...mapping to a propertyof..." p. 117, fig. 65: Class name is "DoorBell" instead of "oorBell" p. 137, last paragraph, first line: "...by a component that offers equivalent..." instead of "...by a component that offers that offers equivalent..." p. 170, first line: "...while the figure on the right..." instead of "...while the figure onj the right..." p. 172, semantics paragraph: Reference to ""StructuredClassifier" on page 171" seems to be wrong (twice) p. 325, stream description: "..., in order of..." instead of "..., in oprder of..." p. 403, last but one paragraph: "...UML language..." instead of "...UML languatge..." p. 537, PrimitiveTypes, first paragraph: "These include primitive types..." instead of "These includes prmitive types..." p. 587, paragraph below fig. 460, last line: "..., the heading is..." instead of "..., the headning is..." Tim --- E-Mail tim.weilkiens@oose.de Fon ++49 +40 41 42 50 - 25 Fax ++49 +40 41 42 50 - 50 oose.de Dienstleistungen für innovative Informatik GmbH Oberstraße 14b, D-20144 Hamburg Amtsgericht Hamburg HRB 66648 Geschäftsführer Bernd Oestereich OMG Issue No: 6164 Title: UML Superstructure: 03-08-02 -- typos Source: Dienstleistungen fur innovative Informatik (Mr. Tim Weilkiens, tim.weilkiens@oose.de) Summary: p. 32, 2nd/3rd semantics paragraph "element" instead of "ele-ment" (twice) "qualified" instead of "qual-ified" p.38, presentation options: "identifies" instead of "identi-fies" p. 108, fig. 53: "«dependencyName»" instead of "«dependecyName»" p. 109, fig. 54: "An example of a instantiate dependency" instead of "An example of a instantiatedependency" p. 110, Description: First and second paragraph are the same. p. 114, 3rd line: "...mapping to a property of..." instead of "...mapping to a propertyof..." p. 117, fig. 65: Class name is "DoorBell" instead of "oorBell" p. 137, last paragraph, first line: "...by a component that offers equivalent..." instead of "...by a component that offers that offers equivalent..." p. 170, first line: "...while the figure on the right..." instead of "...while the figure onj the right..." p. 172, semantics paragraph: Reference to ""StructuredClassifier" on page 171" seems to be wrong (twice) p. 325, stream description: "..., in order of..." instead of "..., in oprder of..." p. 403, last but one paragraph: "...UML language..." instead of "...UML languatge..." p. 537, PrimitiveTypes, first paragraph: "These include primitive types..." instead of "These includes prmitive types..." p. 587, paragraph below fig. 460, last line: "..., the heading is..." instead of "..., the headning is..." Discussion: I have verified each of these items, and they are indeed valid recommendations. The proposed resolution is to make the text changes exactly as cited in the issue text with the exception of the item identified as: p. 110, Description: First and second paragraph are the same. The problem is not that the two paragraphs are the same since they are slightly different, but that the first of the two paragraphs is clearly a corrected version of the second, which contains several typing and spelling errors. Therefore, the recommended action on this item is to remove the second paragraph. Disposition: Resolved OMG Issue No: 6164 Title: UML Superstructure: 03-08-02 -- typos Source: Dienstleistungen fur innovative Informatik (Mr. Tim Weilkiens, tim.weilkiens@oose.de) Summary: p. 32, 2nd/3rd semantics paragraph "element" instead of "ele-ment" (twice) "qualified" instead of "qual-ified" p.38, presentation options: "identifies" instead of "identi-fies" p. 108, fig. 53: "«dependencyName»" instead of "«dependecyName»" p. 109, fig. 54: "An example of a instantiate dependency" instead of "An example of a instantiatedependency" p. 110, Description: First and second paragraph are the same. p. 114, 3rd line: "...mapping to a property of..." instead of "...mapping to a propertyof..." p. 117, fig. 65: Class name is "DoorBell" instead of "oorBell" p. 137, last paragraph, first line: "...by a component that offers equivalent..." instead of "...by a component that offers that offers equivalent..." p. 170, first line: "...while the figure on the right..." instead of "...while the figure onj the right..." p. 172, semantics paragraph: Reference to ""StructuredClassifier" on page 171" seems to be wrong (twice) p. 325, stream description: "..., in order of..." instead of "..., in oprder of..." p. 403, last but one paragraph: "...UML language..." instead of "...UML languatge..." p. 537, PrimitiveTypes, first paragraph: "These include primitive types..." instead of "These includes prmitive types..." p. 587, paragraph below fig. 460, last line: "..., the heading is..." instead of "..., the headning is..." Discussion: I have verified each of these items, and they are indeed valid recommendations. The proposed resolution is to make the text changes exactly as cited in the issue text with the exception of the item identified as: p. 110, Description: First and second paragraph are the same. The problem is not that the two paragraphs are the same since they are slightly different, but that the first of the two paragraphs is clearly a corrected version of the second, which contains several typing and spelling errors. Therefore, the recommended action on this item is to remove the second paragraph. Disposition: Resolved Internet www.oose.de