Issue 8102: Multiple typos in ptc/04-10-02 (uml2-rtf) Source: (, ) Nature: Clarification Severity: Minor Summary: Multiple typos (If you don't want them submitted this way, I'll complete an issue for each.) section 6.34 page 11 Delete word “to” in “The read/write actions can also be used to by one…” section 7.3.3 page 38 Delete word “If’ in the Note “If the lower multiplicity for an end of…” Section 7.3.5 page 46 Correct typo “pr” to “or” in ownedParameter:Parameter[*] Section 7.3.11 page 60 Change “has” to “have” in 2nd para 2nd sentence “Instances of a data type that “has”…” Instances is the subject of the sentence Section 7.3.11 page 61 Add word “to” to Notation sentence 6 “In this case, cone or more arrows with their tails on the clients are connected “to” the tails…” Section 7.3.20 page 71 Change “is” to are in generalizationSet “Designates a set in which instances of Generalization “are” considered members.” The verb refers to the subject of the which clause (instances). Section 7.3.21 page 83 Change “is” to “if” in last sentence of section “Or, “if” a new subclass…” Section 7.3.32 page 97 Change “These constraint” to “These constraints” Section 7.3.32 page 98 Delete word “is” in 2nd sentence of Notation “In general, the notation will include a multiplicity specification shown as…” Section 7.3.37 page 111 Change “is” to “are” in 4th paragraph of Semantics “The public contents of a package are…” Subject of the sentence is contents not package. Section 7.3.49 page 135 and page 136 (Description) Change verb “specify” to “specifies” in “A structureal feature is a typed feature of a classifier that specifies the structure…” Section 7.3.49 page 137 Change verb from “signifies” to signifying” in 1st sentence of Decsription Section 7.3.53 page 139 Delete word “of” in 1st sentence of Semantics Resolution: Discussion This issue has already been resolved by, or no longer applies to, the UML 2.5 Beta 1 specification. Disposition: Closed - No Change Revised Text: Actions taken: January 21, 2005: received issue February 20, 2015: closed issue Discussion: Disposition: Deferred to UML 2.4 RTF End of Annotations:===== m: webmaster@omg.org Date: 21 Jan 2005 13:13:11 -0500 To: Subject: Issue/Bug Report -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Name: Jane Messenger Company: U. S. Geological Survey mailFrom: jmessenger@usgs.gov Notification: Yes Specification: Superstructure Section: All FormalNumber: ptc/04-10-02 Version: 2.0 Draft Adopted RevisionDate: 10/08/2004 Page: All Nature: Clarification Severity: Minor HTTP User Agent: Mozilla/4.0 (compatible; MSIE 6.0; Windows NT 5.0; Q312461) Description Multiple typos (If you don't want them submitted this way, I'll complete an issue for each.) section 6.34 page 11 Delete word .to. in .The read/write actions can also be used to by one.. section 7.3.3 page 38 Delete word .If. in the Note .If the lower multiplicity for an end of.. Section 7.3.5 page 46 Correct typo .pr. to .or. in ownedParameter:Parameter[*] Section 7.3.11 page 60 Change .has. to .have. in 2nd para 2nd sentence .Instances of a data type that .has... Instances is the subject of the sentence Section 7.3.11 page 61 Add word .to. to Notation sentence 6 .In this case, cone or more arrows with their tails on the clients are connected .to. the tails.. Section 7.3.20 page 71 Change .is. to are in generalizationSet .Designates a set in which instances of Generalization .are. considered members.. The verb refers to the subject of the which clause (instances). Section 7.3.21 page 83 Change .is. to .if. in last sentence of section .Or, .if. a new subclass.. Section 7.3.32 page 97 Change .These constraint. to .These constraints. Section 7.3.32 page 98 Delete word .is. in 2nd sentence of Notation .In general, the notation will include a multiplicity specification shown as.. Section 7.3.37 page 111 Change .is. to .are. in 4th paragraph of Semantics .The public contents of a package are.. Subject of the sentence is contents not package. Section 7.3.49 page 135 and page 136 (Description) Change verb .specify. to .specifies. in .A structureal feature is a typed feature of a classifier that specifies the structure.. Section 7.3.49 page 137 Change verb from .signifies. to signifying. in 1st sentence of Decsription Section 7.3.53 page 139 Delete word .of. in 1st sentence of Semantics